Thursday, May 10, 2012

Great presentation by William, Ryan James and Vanessa. Here is the homework. Post your response in the comment section. You can post your responses to the presenters here as well. What did you enjoy most? What did you learn? Self-reflections: what did you learn about yourself? What did you learn about the group process? What worked well? What would you change for next time?

We finish Monday with Miriam, Brittany, Sara (group); Allen and Demetria (individuals).

1.
For A Good Friend

To travel with a friend is to travel on a cruise ship,
For there will be laughter, music, dance and wine;
Yet you still secretly check for life jackets and rafts,
And only sleep safe when your swimming is fine.
To travel with a true friend is to travel in a wooden boat,
With just a limbless you, him, against the mighty tides;
Yet your eyes will close, knowing there can happen only two:
His hands will save you, or with you in him he would, fly...
-Pradeep Dhavakumar
Speaker:________________
Listener:________________


2.
Ocean Flow

Wave, and wave, and wave and current,
The sea keeps going and turning and churning.
From the currents to the waves, to the waves,
One to another, it flows, it flows.

Eternally spinning, turning, churning,
All men caught up in the undertow.
All men swimming, and swimming, and swimming,
Eternally caught up in the ocean flow.
-Celine Koe

Speaker:________________
Listener:________________



3.
Defy Greed

Pay no heed
To your greed
Do it once
Just to give your greatness
A chance.
Once and then once more
As never before
Defy the greed
Pay it no heed.
Here and there
A small sacrifice
Would suffice
You’re learning to share.
You’re learning to defy greed
Learning the worth of a good deed
You’ve it to take the lead
To free the world from greed.
-Pradip Chattopadhyay
Speaker:________________
Listener:________________



4.
Land as a forgotten factor of Life

In the country
The Land will produce the food
You take just what you need
In the city
Money produces the food
You take what you can afford
-Malcolm Bacchus

Speaker:________________
Listener:________________

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

Sherrlyne Apostol
Professor Sabir
English 1B
11 May 2012

Last Thursday William, Ryan and Vanessa did their presentation on Speaker and Listener in the Section about Poetry. I really enjoyed their presentation. I thought it was well organized. Also, I really enjoyed the analysis about the Tupac shakur song. When I first read the tupac song I automatically thought that Tupac was the speaker and the listener was anybody who read the song. However, Professor Sabir made a good statement about the speaker and it doesn't necessarily be the author. It can be intended for a different character other than the actual writer. I thought that was quite interesting. However, everytime I read the song I'm still hearing Tupac. :)

Anonymous said...

Marie Heide
13 May 2012
Prof. Sabir
English 1B

1. Ocean Flow
Speaker:Fisherman
Listener:General public

2. Defy Greed
Speaker: Preacher/Priest
Listener: Congregation

3. For a Good Friend
Speaker: Poet
Listener: People with friends

4. Land as a forgotten fator of Life
Speaker: Farmer
Listener: Son/Daughter

Anonymous said...

Marie Heide
13 May 2012
Prof. Sabir
English 1B

On Thursday, we listened to a presentation about speaker and listener. I found this presentation quite interesting because I found out that poetry can be quite complicated when it comes to identifying who is the speaker and who the intended listener is. I learned that to truly grasp the meaning and message of a poem, it must be read several times with such diligence and concentration to understand who the targeted audience is and who is the speaker. Overall, great presentation and great job!

Anonymous said...

Brittney Brunner
Prof. Wanda Sabir
English 1B
8-8:50 am


William, Ryan and Vanessa did their presentation on Speaker/Listener.. I found their presentation very interesting, well put-together and bright. My absolute fav part was the poem about a trip to the museum how it was kind of a play on words. I liked the discusion we all had about that poem.